Very small update:
(The light from the entrance brightens as the room darkens further. Footsteps can be heard approaching slowly. LOUIS enters).
LOUIS (With a friendly smile): Hello, ladies!
DAVID (To PAUL): Ladies?
PAUL (To DAVID): He’s talking to us.
DAVID (To PAUL): We aren’t female.
PAUL (To DAVID): He’s insulting us.
DAVID (To PAUL): That—
LOUIS (Interrupting): Did I miss it?
DAVID (To PAUL): Well that was rude.
PAUL (To DAVID): What?
DAVID (To PAUL): He interr—
(LOUIS notices JOESEF)
LOUIS (Interrupting): Oh pooh, I did. (He crosses to JOESEF and sees the blood) Messy this time. (he tries to move JOESEF with out touching the blood. He is unsuccessful. He looks to PAUL and DAVID who are whispering to each other). Little help? (They look at him, annoyed and go back to whispering). Move him.
